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    Default Wonka

    New one -



    Ender, The One-Punch Machine Gun

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    Not too bad....pretty good. I like how u made such hard contrasts in light to dark.




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    Get rid of his hands and the faces at the bottom, its throwing off the focus, and take out the text. Other than that, nice.





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    I am taking out the text. But the other stuff stays.

    They can stay because they go with the flow, so therefore it still draws your attention to the main focal; since it's the beginning/center of the flow


    Ender, The One-Punch Machine Gun

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    Ya....I was thinking about the text...its kind of random. Too small (hard to see) and the backwards one loox a tad off.....maybe becuz its bacwards idk (I know ur goin for the reflection thing). I would just eliminate the text.

    I like the hands....they add to the elemnt of like.....HEY LOOK AT ME.
    The faces on the bottom seem a bit misplaced as well.
    Maybe make em a tad bit darker....so they dont draw away from the main image.

    Just sum more opinons from me.
    :P




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